Indie Comic Page 2 Work in Progress + Continuity Layout Test

Page 2 continuity and layout test

Page 2 continuity and layout test

Notice, if I follow my employer’s script, you might get lost with the continuity by page 2 (when you flip the page) because the word balloon just seems to be floating there. I might add a following panel just to clarify it is the same old man from page 1 playing this kid in tennis. What say you?

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